In Will Richardson's “Footprints in the Digital Age” He shows that the marks we make on today's internet can affect people for the rest of their lives. In his article he stresses on the the fact that he wants his kids to have a good search reputation in the world and when his kid gets searched by an employer or future mate that they would find something reinforcing rather than not. He gives us reason to have a contact on a social media site weather we want to or not.
In Will Richardson's "Footprints in the Digital Age" he stresses on the importance to make a good impression on the world via the internet. He gives us example that have a very high probability of happening. This example isn't one of his but also has a very high probability rate. Getting hired as a manager at the new hotel in town can be hard, the interview went well enough to get the job. You are called the next morning with the verdict and you don't get the job. Why? The person on the other line says look up your name on "Google". What is found are pictures of you from last weekends party drunk as a sailor with no pants on. Wouldn't that suck to be so close yet so far from a dream job all because of that one photo. In “Footprints in the Digital Age” by Will Richardson, he uncloaks the hard truth about what can happen if only one bad photo goes on the internet.
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ReplyDeleteMake sure to compose a summary and a response paragraph. Also, make sure that you proofread your writing. I am guessing these aren't finished products.
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Better summary, but eliminate use of personal words in your summary. Keep it focused to formal writing.
ReplyDeleteWith your response, you need to take a position in the response topic sentence. Interesting scenario but not very appropriate. I challenge you to tell the same story but in a much more formal manner. You need at least two examples to support your thinking.
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Good example
ReplyDeleteGood question at the beginning. Good connection. Nice question for us at the end.
ReplyDeletegood stories keeping us involved a little rough. you dressed nice i like your shirt yo :D good question at the end presentation was a little short tho.
ReplyDeleteI liked the example that you gave and I thought you had a good presentation
ReplyDeleteGood Example. little more Content but good job
ReplyDeleteGood job projecting your voice. Look up more.
ReplyDeleteGood start but look at the class more you kinda just read off your phone
ReplyDeletenice start, I like the example you used, good eye contact. great job
ReplyDeleteway to use your phone for your presentation
ReplyDeleteGood Question
ReplyDeleteNice Dress up
Seems very prepared
1. good opening question
ReplyDelete2. good points to help your argument
3. good ending question
4. good conversation with the class
Good points. Great question and good argument.
ReplyDeleteNice questions. Nice picture at the end
ReplyDeleteI think you had a good speech and usage of phone. I believe you should be more prepared, and also make the ending question less confusing.
ReplyDeletenice ending question and good discussion
ReplyDeletegood question
ReplyDeleteGood story of what might happen if you do not take appropriate precautions on the internet,
ReplyDeleteyour opening point was good, but then you made the picture of there permit witch was really like not alarming it was just..... i didn't get that part. Ask more specific questions
ReplyDeleteYour points on how it could be dangerous. Awesome question that led to a great discussion.
ReplyDeleteGood presentation. Good example for your points. good discussion
ReplyDeletePicture was beautiful. You kind of lost control of the class at the end.
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